Saturday, July 25, 2009

new configuration for book on tighrope





1 comment:

  1. love how this piece is coming along.

    really like the format a lot.

    feel the small text is working very well.

    while the outline large slab is not working at least in places.

    suggest you go with something much lighter and smaller.

    perhaps akkurat or even batarde.

    outline "famous tightrope artists" is way overwhelming.

    bio mechanics and light blue large tight rope artists works.

    cover still needs to come together.

    letterspacing on the cover needs attending to.

    space between t and ightrope is too large.

    some other places also need fussing with.

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